Editing: Student Council: Your Ticket to Involvement

What is the correct way to write sentence 1 &2?

• Many people think that student council is just for planning dances, promising things that can't be delivered, and liking free candy for all students or the ability to leave campus.

• Many people think that student council id just for planning dances and promising things that can't be delivered, like free candy for all students or the ability to leave campus for lunch.

• Many people think that student council is just for planning dances and promising things. That cant's be delivered, like free candy for all students or the ability to leave campus for lunch.

• Many people think that student council is just fro planning dances and promising things that can't be delivered, they promise free candy and the ability to leave campus for lunch.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

• They often have small budgets, so fundraising activities may need to be coordinated as well.

• They often have small budgets, or fundraising activities may need to be coordinated as well.

• They often have small budgets fundraising activities may need to coordinated as well.

• They often have small budgets, therefore, fundraising activities may need to be coordinated as well.

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CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2

What change should be made to sentence 17?

• Change For example to Even though

• Delete the comma after students

• Change disabilities to disabilities'

• Add a comma after disabilities

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18?

• Change doesn't to don't

• Change high school to High School

• Change will fit to will be able to fit

• No change is necessary

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CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

How should sentence 26 be changed?

• Change Admissions Counselors to admissions counselor

• Change to to too

• Change committees to commities

• Sentence 23 should not be changed

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CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

What change should be made in sentence 32?

• Insert decide to before participate

• Remove the commas

• Change will have gained to will gain

• Change the end punctuation to an exclamation point

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D