Revising and Editing Practice

How should sentences 1 and 2 be rewritten?

• The term hunting dog describes a canine that hunts with humans.

• With humans, the term hunting dog describes a canine that hunts.

• The term hunting dog describes a canine. That hunts with humans.

• The term hunting dog describes a canine that hunts. With humans.

Which is correct?

• Their are various types of hunting dogs.

• Their are various types at hunting dogs.

• Their are various types of hunting dogs?

• There are various types of hunting dogs.

Which is correct?

• Typically the Labrador Retriever is widely considered one of the bestest hunting dogs.

• Typically, the Labrador Retriever is widely considered one of the bestest hunting dog's.

• Typically, the Labrador Retriever is widely considered on of the best hunting dogs.

• Typically, the Labrador Retriever is widely considered one of the bestest hunting dogs.

DIfferent dog breeds have different skills.

Which sentence could best be added to follow and support this sentence?

• Sometimes, the hunting dogs are startled by the hunter's gun.

• A Labrador Retriever is also considered the most popular dog breed.

• Be sure you are careful because hunting dogs sometimes kill chickens and other farm animals.

• Although hunting dogs are used to hunt many species of prey, they are most commonly used for bird hunting.

Which of the following is correct?

• They can hunt, retrieve or flush animals out of an area.

• Them can hunt retrieve or flush animals out of an area.

• Them can hunt retrieve or flush anamals out of an area.

• Them can hunt, retrieve or flush animals out of an area.

Which of the following is correct?

• These canines hunt things like foxes, deer, ducks, and many other species of prey.

• These canines hunts things like foxs, deer, ducks, and many other species of prey.

• These canines hunts things like foxes, deer, ducks, and many other species of pray.

• These canines hunts things like foxes, deer, ducks, and many other species of prey.

Which of the following is correct?

• Hunting dogs are normally great with families and are loyal companions on hunting grounds or at home.

• Hunting dog's are normally great with familys and are loyal companions on hunting grounds or at home.

• Hunting dogs are normally great with familys, and are loyal companions on hunting grounds or at home.

• Hunting dogs are normally great with familys and are loyal companions on hunting grounds or at home.

Which of the following is correct?

• Spanish missions were built, to teach Native Americans the Spanish Way of Life.

• Spanish missions were built to teach Native Americans the Spanish way of life.

• Spanish missions was built to teach Native Americans the Spanish Way of Life.

• Spanish missions were built to teach Native Americans the Spanish Way of Life.

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence?

• There was also at least one well inside the walls.

• Corrals for keeping cattle, sheep, and goats.

• In the afternoon, the children had chores to do.

• Other tribes did not like mission life.

Which of the following is correct?

• They learn the Spanish language and they learned the Catholic religion from the Spanish priests.

• They learned the Spanish language and they learned the Catholic Religion from the Spanish priests.

• They learned the Spanish language, and they learned the Catholic religion from the Spanish priests.

• They learned the Spanish language and they learned the Catholic religion from the Spanish priests.