Mama Dog

What is the best way to revise sentence 15?

• The animals at the sanctuary were comforted when Jasmine's loving presence and gentle care comforted them.

• The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine's loving presence and gentle care.

• The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine, who had her loving presence and her gentle care.

• The animals at the sanctuary were comforted by Jasmine, her loving presence, and her gentle care.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 2 and 3?

• The officers took the dog to the Nuneaton Warwickshire Wildlife Sanctuary, this is a shelter for homeless animals.

• The officers took the dog to the Nuneaton Warwickshire Wildlife Sanctuary and a shelter for homeless animals.

• The officers, who took the dog to the Nuneaton Warwickshire Wildlife Sanctuary, had a shelter for homeless animals.

• The officers took the dog to Nuneaton Warwickshire Wildlife Sanctuary, a shelter for homeless animals.

Joe did not maintain a consistent point of view in the first paragraph of this paper. What revision should he make in sentence 5 to correct this problem?

• Change she arrived to the dog arrived

• Change you to humans

• Change no one to they

• Change she would become to it would become

Joe wants to provide a better closing for the second paragraph. Which of these could be added after sentence 10 to more effectively close this paragraph?

• People thought Jasmine was a very strange and unique dog.

• The staff was afraid that Jasmine might accidentally harm the puppies.

• She took care of them as if she had given birth to them herself.

• At that moment the workers at the shelter knew that Jasmine was special.

Joe would like to add a sentence to support the idea he has presented in sentence 14. Which of these could BEST follow and support sentence 14?

• According to the staff, once Jasmine and the fawn met, they were inseperable.

• Clearly, the fawn was just a little baby at 11 weeks old.

• Jasmine preferred to take care of animals that were similar to her.

• Bunnies, badgers, guinea pigs, birds, and fawns-Jasmine cared for a strange mix of animals.