Editing and Revising - "Your Amazing Brain!"

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change Scientists to Scientists'

• Delete the comma

• Change we to they

• No change should be made in this sentence.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Delete the comma

• Change controlling to controling

• Change intentional to intentionally

• Sentence 5 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 7?

• Change It’s to Its

• Change are to is

• Change balance to balence

• No change needs to be made in this sentence

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the correct way to write sentences 9 and 10?

• It connects your brain to your spinal cord, this connects to most of the nerves in your body

• Connecting your brain to your spinal cord and then to most of the nerves in your body.

• Connecting your brain to your spinal cord. It connects to most of the nerves in your body

• It connects your brain to your spinal cord, which connects to most of the nerves in your body.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?

• Change breath to breathe

• Change beating to beeting

• Change directs to directing

• Sentence 12 should not be changed.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Insert a comma after finger

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 24?

• Change intricacies to intracacies

• Change sensative to sensitive

• Change delicate to delacate

• Sentence 24 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5