Revising and Editing

What change should be made to the sentence below?

I didn't thought Mr. Torturo could be so cruel.

• change didn't to did'nt

• change cruel to crule

• change be to been

• change thought to think

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What change if any should be made to the sentence below?

He has given us hard math problems before, but this problem is the difficultest.

• change hard to harder

• change difficultest to most difficult

• delete the comma

• make no change

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

The following sentences must be combined, what is the best way to combine the following sentences?

I'm not a genius. Certainly not an Einstein.

• I'm not a genius certainly, but not an Einstein.

• I'm not a genius certainly or an Einstein.

• I'm not a genius and certainly not an Einstein.

• An Einstein, a genius certainly I am not.

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What is the correct way to write the sentence below?

Could I solve it with a calculator I asked him or solve it with a partner.

• I asked him, if I could use a calculator, or solve it with a partner.

• I asked him if I could use a calculator or solve it with a partner.

• I asked him if I could use a calculator. Or solve it with a partner.

• The sentence is written correctly in the selection.

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What change should be made to the sentence below?

The first succesful space flight with a human was also achieved by the Soviet Union.

• Delete the word space

• Change flight to flite

• change succesful to sucessful

• change succesful to successful

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CCSS.L.9-10.2C

Which of the following is not a complete sentence?

• In fact, the Soviet space program sent up the first satellite, called Sputnik, to orbit our planet.

• Yuri Gagarin was a Soviet pilot he was the first man in space.

• And the moon?

• The United States won this round.

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What is the best way to write the following sentence?

Yuri Gagarin was a Soviet pilot he was the first man in space.

• Yuri Gagarin was a Soviet pilot. Was first in space.

• Yuri Gagarin, a Soviet pilot, was the first man in space.

• Yuri Gagarin he was a Soviet pilot and the first man in space.

• He was a Soviet pilot. He was the first man in space.

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What change needs to be made in the following sentence?

The city with the most people living in it, officially is Tokyo, Japan.

• change people to peeple

• change most to mostest

• delete the comma after Tokyo

• Add a comma after officially

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Delhi, in India, has a percolation of over 25,000,000.

The word percolation is not the correct word for the sentence. Which word should be used?

• puncuation

• population

• habitation

• plurality

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CCSS.L.9-10.4A

What is the best way to revise the sentence below?

Our most populous city is New York barely makes the top ten list with about 19,000,000 inhabitants.

• New York is our most populous city, barely, it makes the top ten list with about 19,000,000 inhabitants.

• New York, is our most populous city. Barely. It makes the top ten list with about 19,000,000 inhabitants.

• Our most populous city, New York, barely makes the top ten list with about 19,000,000 inhabitants.

• The sentence is written correctly in the selection.

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