Combining/revising sentences

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9? (8) He had a favorite book. (9) It was Judy Blume’s Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing.

• He had a favorite book, since it was Judy Blume’s Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing.

• He had a favorite book and Judy Blume’s Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing.

• He had a favorite book it was Judy Blume’s Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing

• His favorite book was Judy Blume’s Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.4.2C

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 20?

(20) All the while it was a regular kid he had been thinking of a story about.

• All the while a regular kid had been thinking about a story.

• All the while he had been thinking of a story about a regular kid

• All the while he had been thinking about a regular kid and a story.

• All the while he had been thinking of a story it was about a regular kid.

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What is the correct way to write sentences 11 and 12? (11) With their excellent color vision. (12) They are able to find fruit and flowers in the tropical forest.

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers. In the tropical forest.

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers in the tropical forest.

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers these are in the tropical forest.

• Sentences 11 and 12 are written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

What is the correct way to write sentence 16?

(16) They live in family groups called troops these troops can have as many as 20 members.

• Living in family groups called troops that can have as many as 20 members.

• They live in family groups called troops. And can have as many as 20 members

• The family groups they live in are called troops and can have. As many as 20 members.

• They live in family groups called troops that can have as many as 20 members.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What is the correct way to write sentence 6?

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. And looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country, and it looks pink. Because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. It looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country and looks pink that is because it is made from sunset-red granite.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1J

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

(11) A museum that tells the story of Texas through three floors of exhibits.

• This museum tells the story of Texas. Through three floors of exhibits.

• A museum that tells the story of Texas. Through three floors of exhibits.

• This museum tells the story of Texas through three floors of exhibits.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.4.1F