Revision and Editing

Which revision, if any, should be made to the sentence? Anthony could see for hisself that the water was overflowing the sink

• change see to sea

• Add a comma after that

• change hisself to himself

• NO revision needed

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence? Elizabeth saw an article in the Colorado gazette abou the election of the president.

• Add a comma after article

• change president to President

• Change an to a

• Change gazette to Gazette

What revision, if any, should be made to the sentence? Maggies' dress was the most beautiful dress at the dance.

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful

• Change Maggies' to Maggie's

• change dance to danse

• No revision needed

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence? Dad surprised us all when he announced, "let's all go on a camping trip this weekend."

• Delete the quotation marks

• Remove the comma after announced

• Change let's to Let's

• The sentence is correct.

How should the sentence be edited?

When I looked ahead I could sea one trail, but beyond that were several more trails to follow

• Change to to two

• Change one to won

• Change sea to see

• Change trail to trale

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

The headlights on the truck showing that we were on a long, winding road

• Change showing to showed

• Change that to something

• Change were to was

• Make no change

What is the the correct way to write the sentence?

I took some yummy soup to my Grandmother, who was not feeling well.

• Change took to tooken

• Change soup to soop

• Change Grandmother to grandmother

• The sentence is correct as written

What is the correct way to combine the two sentences?

Jeremy had basketball practice. Jeremy also having homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, but he also had homework.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, Jeremy also had homework to do.

• Jeremy had basketball practice, because Jeremy also had homework to do.

• The sentences are correct

What change needs to be made to the sentence?

Joshua's mom said he cannot go outside to play because its too cold

• Change its to it's

• Change mom to Mom

• Change too to to

• No change needed

What is the best way to write the two sentences.

It became too wet to play football. It was raining outside.

• It became wet outside because it was too rainy and playing football

• It became too wet to play football, because ti was raining outside.

• It became too wet to play football because it was raining outside.

• The two sentences are correct.