editing and revising

which sentence is written correctly?

• John went to the park but, it started raining.

• John went to the park, but it started raining

• John went to the Park, and it started to rain!

• John went to the park, but it started raining.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What is the best way to combine these sentences.

"I ate too much food. My stomach hurts."

• I ate too much food, now my stomach hurts.

• I ate too much food so my stomach hurts.

• I ate too much food; my stomach hurts.

• I ate too much food because my stomach hurts.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change should be made?

Before long they realized that it was already 10:30pm!

• before long, they realized that it was already 10:30pm!

• They realized it was 10:30pm!

• Before long it 10:30!

• Before long, they realized that it was already 10:30pm!

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What transition should be used to connect this sentence?

It rained outside. We had to go indoors.

• It rained outside but we had to go indoors.

• It rained outside, or we had to go indoors.

• It rained outside, so we had to go indoors.

• It rained; outside we had to go indoors.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

After school we went shopping

• Comma after school

• Comma after after

• Change shopping to shoping

• No change is necessary.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which change, if any, is needed to correct the sentence.

You're dog is so adorable.

• change dog to Dog

• Change adorable to adoroble

• change You're to Your

• No change is necessary

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

Is the sentence written correctly?

Although it was raining, we went outside anyway and we ran.

• YES

• NO

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Are you going to the party tonite?

• Are you going to the party tonight!

• Are you going to the party tonight.

• Are you going to the party tonight?

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

Which is the best way to correct the sentence.

After school today, I went to Jenna's house and we hung out.

• No change is necessary

• Comma after house

• comma after Jenna's

• comma after went

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which is correct?

• His featres remained impassive, turning vicious even as he turned around and left.

• His features remained impasive turning vicious even as he turned around and left.

• His features remained impassive, turning vicious, even as he turned around and left.

• His features remained impassive and turning vicious even as he turned around and left.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C