Series 7 Comp 1

What is the best way to revise sentence 2?

• These frisky critters I watch on weekends search for food while I sit on the porch in my favorite chair.

• On weekends, I sit in my favorite chair on the porch and what these frisky critters search for food.

• I sit on my favorite chair, watch these frisky critters and search for food on weekends on the porch.

• I watch these frisky critters search for food in my favorite chair on the weekends on the porch while I sit.

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 & 4?

• The birds look for seeds and insects, the squirrels look for seeds and nuts.

• The birds and squirrels both look for seeds, and the squirrels look for nuts.

• The birds look for seeds and insects while the squirrels lookn for seed and nuts.

• The birds look either for seeds or insects, but the squirrels don't look for insects.

Xioa-Chen would like to add the sentence to her paper, where should she insert the sentence?

• After sentence 17

• After sentence 20

• After sentence 14

• After sentence 10

Xioa-Chen wants to add a closing sentence to her paper. Which sentence could best follow sentence 23?

• F

• G

• H

• J

Which sentence does not belong in this paper?

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 7

• Sentence 16

• Sentence 21