Revise and Edit 2

Because Mariah always told them about her day, they were shocked when they didn’t hear from her. Which sentence below provides more clarity?

• Change they to her parents

• Change shocked to surprised

• Change day to it

• Change always to usually

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.L.7.5C

Reading books and magazines are my favorite activity to do during independent study time.

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence?

• Add a comma after books

• Change favorite to favourite

• Change are to is

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.7.2A

“Hey Mom,” Lillie continued “I am going to Anna’s to study for my science exam tomorrow.”

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• Change Mom to mom

• Remove the comma after Mom

• Add a comma after continued

• The sentence does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.7.2B

It’s important that I listen too my teacher, so I can pass the test.

How should the sentence be changed?

• Change It’s to Its

• Change too to to

• Remove the comma after teacher

• Change teacher to Teacher

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CCSS.L.7.2A

CCSS.L.7.3A

When I went to tutorials, my teacher explained how to use apostrophes and I finally understood.

What change needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change explained to explains

• Remove the comma after tutorials

• Change apostrophe to apostrophes

• Add a comma after apostrophes

Todays objective is to learn how to revise and edit our own essays.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change is to are

• Change essays to essay’s

• Change Todays to Today’s

• Change objective to objetive

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

CCSS.W.7.5

Its proven that plenty of rest and a good breakfast will allow students to do their best on a test.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change Its to it’s

• Change plenty to plentie

• Change their to there

• Change students to student’s

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.L.7.4A

CCSS.W.7.4

If your teacher asks you to stop talking today, you should stop talking.

How should the sentence be changed?

• Change your to you’re

• Remove the comma after today

• Change asks to asked

• The sentence should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.7.3A

I watched the movie before I read the book and it ruined the book for me.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Insert a comma before and

• Change watched to watch

• Change ruined to runed

• Insert a comma after movie

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CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.2B

During the summer, the kids enjoy going to the park with our mom.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change summer to Summer

• Change kids to kids’

• Change our to their

• The sentence should not be changed.