Correcting Choppy Sentences

Tennis requires alertness and tactical thinking. It can generate new connections between nerves. Therefore, it can promote a lifetime of continuing development of the brain.

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• Since tennis requires alertness and tactical thinking, it can generate new connections between nerves and thus promote a lifetime of continuing development of the brain.

• Tennis requires alertness and tactical thinking, and that can generate new connections between nerves. This promotes a lifetime of continuing development of the brain.

• Players that play tennis need alertness and tactical thinking. This can generate new connections between nerves.

• Tennis requires alertness and tactical thinking and can promote a lifetime of continuing development for the brain.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

Baking is beneficial. It has a calming, meditative quality. The process of weighing out butter and sugar, whisking eggs, beating and folding creates space in the mind. It eases negative thinking processes.

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• Baking is beneficial because it's repetitiveness of weighing out butter and sugar, whisking eggs, beating and folding creates space in the mind and eases negative thinking processes.

• Baking is beneficial because of it's calming meditative quality.

• Baking eases negative thinking processes because of it's repetitive, calming and meditative quality.

• Baking is beneficial because it has a calming, meditative quality. The process of weighing out butter and sugar, whisking eggs, beating and folding creates space in the mind and eases negative thinking processes.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Japan's white strawberries were developed in 2006. They were developed in the Yamanashi Prefecture. Although they look unripe and sour, they are really sweet. They are white on the outside. They are also white on the inside.

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• Japan's white strawberries look unripe and disgusting, but they are very sweet. They are white both inside and outside.

• Japan has white strawberries developed in 2006, in the Yamanashi Prefecture. They are very sweet.

• Japan's white strawberries were developed in 2006 in the Yamanashi Prefecture. Despite looking unripe and sour, they are very sweet. They are both white on the inside and the outside.

Boxing helps release stress. During a boxing workout, you don't have the mental power to worry about other things. You can take out your anger on the bags. You temporarily forget all your worries.

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• Boxing helps release stress, as you can temporarily forget your anger. You don't have mental power to worry during workouts.

• Boxing helps release stress, as during a workout you don't have the mental power to worry about other things. You can take out your anger during your workout and temporarily forget your worries.

• You can release anger and stress during boxing workouts, which can help you a lot.

• Boxing can help you temporarily forget your worries and release stress. You can take out your anger during workouts.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

When playing the piano, memorize notes and chord structure. It simplifies your playing. It will help you in the future when you add dynamics and a steady tempo.

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• When playing the piano, memorize the notes and chord structure, as it simplifies your playing. It will help in the future.

• Memorizing the notes and chord structure can simplify your piano playing. It will assist in the future, when dynamics and a steady tempo are added.

• Memorize the notes and chord structure of piano music. It simplifies your playing.

• Memorizing the notes and chord structure helps in the future. It simplified your piano playing for later when you add dynamics.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

China's folklore is part of their country's proud tradition. Hundreds of stories are told. They teach certain admirable characteristics in individuals. These characteristics include moderation, respect for elders, wisdom, and justice.

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• The folklore of China is part of their tradition. Stories are told to teach characteristics in individuals.

• The folklore of China is part of their country's proud tradition, with hundreds of stories told to teach certain admirable characteristics in individuals. These characteristics include moderation, respect for elders, wisdom, and justice.

• Folklore teaches characteristics to those who listen. These include wisdom, justice, and respect for elders.

• China's folklore teaches individuals the meaning of moderation, respect for elders, and justice.

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CCSS.L.4.1F