Combine sentences/rewrite sentences

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 24 and 25?

(24) He made his way steadily down.

(25) A grin began to spread over his face.

• Since he made his way steadily down with a grin, it began to spread over his face.

• He made his way steadily down because a grin began to spread over his face.

• As he made his way steadily down, a grin began to spread over his face.

• He made his way steadily down a grin began to spread over his face.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

What is the correct way to write sentence 13?

(13) For the fourth grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, they were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, there were a lot of kids they wore new hiking shoes that were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike. A lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, and they were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes. That were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the correct way to write sentence 20?

(20) Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

What is the correct way to write sentences 24 and 25?

(24) My father was very clear about how long to wait.

(25) Before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about this. How long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear. About how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about this he told me how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 21?

(21) Bright-red berrys began to grow on shrubs, and tiny wildflowers started to dot the landscape.

• change berrys to berries

• Delete and

• wildflowers to wildflower's

• no change needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D