What is the correct way to write sentences 16 and 17?

I like to climb to the top of the vines and look out over the jungle below.

I like to climb to the top of the vines, and look out. Over the jungle below.

I like to climb, to the top, of the vines and look out over the jungle below.

Sentences 16 and 17 are correct

Write about a job you would like to have when you become an adult. Explain why you would like to have that job.

Many children want to become doctors, firefighters, or veterinarians when they grow up.

Think about what you want to become when you grow up.

What would you brainstorm for this prompt?

A job you would like to have as an adult and why

Children want to be doctors and why

Growing up and why you need a job

Children want to be firefighters and why

What does the middle of your essay do?

Explains your main ideas for the prompt

State the hook and topic sentences

What does your conclusion do?

Restate the topic sentence and wrap up your essay

State your hook and topic sentence

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

Change me and my brother to my brother and I

(1) Many people believe that Nessie, the creature that lives beneath the Loch Ness in Scotland, is a monster. (2) According to past stories. (3) Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur! What is the correct way to write sentences 2 and 3?

According to past stories, Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

According to past stories, Nessie is related, to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, according to past stories.

Related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, Nessie, according to past stories.

"We've got to go quickly, said his mother. What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

insert quotation marks after quickly

(1) The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory. (2) They had a wonderful time! I want to add more detail after sentence 1. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 1?

An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope.

The students went on a field trip.

All of the kids got to ride on the school bus to the university.

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence?

Timothy turned his homework in late.

The bird perched on the power line.

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

change grandmother to Grandmother

Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

Change theirselves to themselves

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project.

Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.

Michael used colored pencils for the art project, Liam used paints for the project.

Michael used colored pencils for the art project and Liam used paints.

Michael used colored pencils for the art project then Liam used paints for the art project.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: When I opened my present I let out a yell.

Change I let out to and yell out

Writing Revising & Editing

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English

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4th Grade

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Practice Problem

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Hard

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CCSS

L.4.2C, L.2.1F, L.4.1B

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1.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision?
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

2.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

The boys (drove/drived) the car down the street.

drove

drived

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

3.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

Change they're to their.

Change father to Father

Change they're to there

Change helped to helping

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

4.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

Change friends to friend's

Insert a comma after After

Insert a comma after shopping

Insert a comma after store

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

5.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

Sentence Combining:
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

He was practicing his soccer skills because he found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills, there, he found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills; and then found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills when he found a stray dog.

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

6.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

What change, if any, should be made?
Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

Change bakeing to baking

Change I to me

Change cookies to cookie's

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

7.

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

45 sec • 1 pt

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

I went to the store and bought apples, oranges and bananas.

I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and, bananas.

I went to the store, and bought apples oranges and bananas.

I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and bananas.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

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35 questions

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision?
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

The boys (drove/drived) the car down the street.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

Sentence Combining:
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

What change, if any, should be made?
Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

Which words need to be capitalized in this sentence?
mom, I need to go to the grocery store to get some gatorade.

What is the correct way to write sentences 16 and 17?

What is the prompt?

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The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

The boys (drove/drived) the car down the street.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

Sentence Combining: Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

What change, if any, should be made?Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

Which words need to be capitalized in this sentence?mom, I need to go to the grocery store to get some gatorade.

What is the correct way to write sentences 16 and 17?

What is the prompt?

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The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision?
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

Sentence Combining:
Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

What change, if any, should be made?
Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

Which words need to be capitalized in this sentence?
mom, I need to go to the grocery store to get some gatorade.