Revise Review - Feb

1. Jack wants to add another detail to this paragraph (sentences 8–12). Which of these could follow sentence 10 and add to the main idea?

• A. Maybe there are other things people find to do with the ivory.

• B. There are some areas in China where people believe a Narwhal tusk can cure sickness.

• C. Another type of whale, the Cuvier whale, can hold its breath for over 100 minutes.

• D. That’s why so many people are interested in narwhal tusks.

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CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.3.1

CCSS.RL.4.1

CCSS.RL.5.1

What is the BEST transition to add to the beginning of sentence 15?

• A. In the beginning

• B. In addition

• C. As a result

• D. However

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

3. The word larger is not the right word for sentence 20. Which word should replace larger in this sentence?

• A. giant

• B. longer

• C. stricter

• D. lighter

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CCSS.RI.11-12.10

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RI.7.10

CCSS.RI.8.10

CCSS.RI.9-10.10

Which of these could follow sentence 5 and effectively state the central idea of this paper?

• A. Rowling’s life story is a perfect example of how determination can lead to fulfilling your life goals.

• B. Rowling wrote the books in the Harry Potter series and some movies have been made.

• C. Rowling had a difficult childhood and also a difficult time as an adult is what I think.

• D. You should love JK Rowling, because I’m going to tell you why.

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CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

5. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

• A. She wrote her first book, since it was a story called Rabbit.

• B. She wrote her first book and story called Rabbit.

• C. Her first book was a story called Rabbit.

• D. She wrote her first book it was a story called Rabbit.

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 20?

• A. All on one train, a magical kid started thinking about a story.

• B. All on one train, she started thinking of a story about a magical kid.

• C. All on one train, she started thinking about a magical kid and a story.

• D. All on one train, she started thinking of a story it was about a magical kid.

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3