Support details and thesis statement

A thesis statement should not directly announce your topic by using phrases such as, "This essay will talk about ........"
Which of the following makes the best thesis statement?

• A. Even though marriage is a strong and respected institution in Russia, more and more people are choosing to live together before marriage, despite the cultural pressures.
• B. I am going to explain why many couples in Russia are choosing to live together rather than getting married.
• C. Marriage in Russia.

A thesis statement is a complete sentence. A thesis statement is not a question.
Which of these is a thesis statement?

• A. Knowing a foreign language.
• B. Why should people know a foreign language?
• C. Knowing a foreign language is a very useful skill.  It can help one advance in a career, relate better to others, and open one's mind to the ideas of another culture.

Should students wear school uniforms?
Students should not be forced to wear school uniforms because they make everyone look the same, they are expensive, and they are uncomfortable.

• Good
• Bad

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

Choose the strong thesis.

•  I would like to become a chef when I finish school
•  Although both chefs and cooks can prepare fine meals, chefs differ from cooks in   education, professional commitment, and artistry.

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CCSS.RI.K.8

Select the best thesis statement. 

• I've lived in a small town my entire life and have enjoyed it.
• Living in a big city has many headaches.
• In contrast to living in a big city, living in a smaller town, allows for closer relationships with friends and a healthier lifestyler.

Select the best thesis statement. 

• There are many ways in which you can look for a new house.
• People can look for a new house by reading the classified ads, talking to a realtor, or talking with friends about houses in the area .
• Buying a new house is a difficult thing to do.

Select the best thesis statement

• Some of the major causes behind common diseases in the United States could be traced to three main factors: poor diet, lack of exercise, and smoking.

• What are some of the main causes behind many of our diseases in the United States today?

• This essay examines some of the major causes behind many of our diseases in the United States today.

Which of the following is the strongest thesis statement?

• Friendship is cool.

• It is important to have a good friend because they'll be the ones who will be with you when you take your last breath in the end.

• Friends are the most important people in your life.