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Ray brought the bats and balls Caroline brought gloves and helmets.

• Ray brought the bats and balls, Caroline brought gloves and helmets.

• Ray brought the bats and balls; Caroline brought gloves and helmets.

• Ray brought the bats and balls and Caroline brought gloves and helmets.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

He hated cold weather; nevertheless, he loved living in a place where it snowed.

• He hated cold weather; nevertheless he loved living in a place where it snowed.

• He hated cold weather nevertheless, he loved living in a place where it snowed.

• He hated cold weather, nevertheless, he loved living in a place where it snowed.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

My brother Sam, the boy with the brown hair plays baseball.

• My brother Sam, the boy with the brown hair, plays baseball.

• My brother Sam the boy with the brown hair plays baseball.

• My brother Sam the boy with the brown hair, plays baseball.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

When did the teacher say "The project is due Friday"?

• When did the teacher say "The project is due Friday?"

• When did the teacher say "The project is due Friday".

• When did the teacher say, "The project is due Friday"?

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

When was the contest winners announced?

• When are the contest winners announced?

• When were the contest winners announced?

• When will the contest winners announced?

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

Which boots have you wore for most of your hikes?

• Which boots have you worn for most of your hikes?

• Which boots have you weared for most of your hikes?

• Which boots have you wearing for most of your hikes?

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

"I can't believe you did that," my parents said to me.

• "I can't believe you did that" my parents said to me.

• "I can't believe you did that," my parents said, to me.

• "I can't believe you did that," my parents said to me!

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

Samantha, the girl whose father is a famous movie producer has met many celebrities.

• Samantha, the girl whose father is a famous movie producer has met many celebrities.

• Samantha, the girl whose father is a famous movie producer, has met many celebrities.

• Samantha the girl whose father is a famous movie producer has met many celebrities.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Because he did not take out the garbage when he was asked, Zane got in trouble with his parents.

• He did not take out the garbage when he was asked, Zane got in trouble with his parents.

• Because he did not take out the garbage when he was asked Zane got in trouble with his parents.

• Because he did not take out the garbage, when he was asked, Zane got in trouble with his parents.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

After the team won the game the crowd stormed the field.

• After the team won the game, the crowd stormed the field.

• After, the team won the game the crowd stormed the field.

• After the team won the game; the crowd stormed the field.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A