Dangling and Misplaced Modifiers

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly? 

• Filled with caramel, Dane enjoyed the surprisingly filling candy bar.

• Filled with caramel, the candy bar Dane enjoyed was surprisingly filling.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.7.4

Choose the sentence with the modifier in the correct place.

• The clerk sold the scarf to the woman with the red print.
• The clerk sold the scarf with the red print to the woman.

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CCSS.L.7.1C

Choose the sentence with the modifier in the correct place.

• On her way to school, Marissa found a woman's green purse.
•  On her way to school, Marissa found a green woman's purse.

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CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• The lady shopped for a dress with a headache.

• The lady with a headache shopped for a dress.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Though only 16-years-old, the college accepted Martha's application.

• Although Martha is only 16-years-old, the college accepted her application.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Changing the oil every 3,000 miles, the car seemed to run better.

• Changing the oil every 3,000 miles, Fred found he could get much better gas mileage.

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CCSS.L.7.1C

CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Gasping after the 5-mile run in the summer sun, the bottle of cold water quenched Donovan's thirst.

• Gasping after the 5-mile run in the summer sun, Donovan quenched his thirst with a bottle of cold water.

• Gasping after the 5-mile run in the summer sun, Donovan's thirst was quenched with a bottle of cold water.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Digging fingernails into his palms, Jerry's speech caused sweatiness and nervousness.

• Digging fingernails into his palms, Jerry got sweaty and nervous during the speech.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Drooling in anticipation of the treat, Gizmo waited for Sylvia to reward him with a dog cookie.

• Drooling in anticipation of the treat, Sylvia rewarded Gizmo with a dog cookie.

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CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.3D

CCSS.W.7.4

Which sentence is written MOST clearly and correctly?

• Exhausted by his first day at school, Sam's eyes closed in the middle of his favorite TV show.

• Exhausted by his first day at school, Sam closed his eyes in the middle of his favorite TV show.

Tags

CCSS.L.7.1C

CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4