Cowboys in Texas Revise and Edit

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 2?

• change missionaries to Missionaries

• insert a comma after Americans

• change roaming to roming

• no change is needed

Which transition word or phrase could best be added to the beginning of sentence 10?

• Whenever,

• However,

• As a result,

• Later that year,

Trisha wants to add a topic sentence to the beginning of the third paragraph (sentences13 through 21). Which is the best sentence to add?

• Most of the cowboys were young men who needed a job.

• Cowboys did not earn much money on the trail.

• A cowboy's life on the trail was hard

• The cowboys became good friends during the trail drive.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 15?

• change wore to wear

• change protecting to protect

• change their to there

• make no change

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 19?

• change hear to here

• change lonely to loanly

• change it to them

• no change is needed

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 21?

• change supplys to supplies

• insert a comma after food

• change He to They

• no change is needed