Editing Friday 4/3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

I soon relaxed and enjoyed her surroundings.

• Change relaxed to relaxing

• change her to my

• change surroundings to suroundings

• no change is needed

What change should be made in sentence 7?

We had reached the canyons top after the long ride!

• change had reached to are reaching

• change canyons to canyon's

• insert a comma after top

• change after to by

What change should be made in sentence 5?

There is also a musseum and a gift shop.

• Change There to Their

• Delete also

• Change musseum to museum

• No change is needed

What change needs to be made in sentence 8?

No tea is served, but guests enjoy lots of punch and cookies.

• change tea to teas

• change is served to are served

• change enjoy to enjoys

• no change is needed

What change if any is needed in sentence 13?

As the cool fall morning gives way to a bright, suny day, the parade ends with riders on horseback.

• remove the comma after the word bright

• change suny to sunny

• change parade to Parade

• make no change