Whole Year Review - Revising & Editing

Which word best completes the following sentence:
I saw so much descriptive language in the story that it painted a picture in my head of what was happening. In other words, I saw lots of ______.

• tone
• imagery
• theme
• metaphors

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.
• Change father to Father
• Change they're to there
• Change helped to helping

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's
• Insert a comma after After
• Insert a comma after shopping
• Insert a comma after store

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What should be changed in this sentence:

Why did the little puppy dog lick its sore paw.

• Change its to it's

• Change sore to soar

• Change puppy to puppey

• Change the period to a question mark

Which words correctly complete this sentence:
I wonder ______ the ______ will change this weekend.

• weather/whether
• whether/weather

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

Sentence Combining:

Which of these is the correct way to join the two sentences:

• He was practicing his soccer skills because he found a stray dog.

• He was practicing his soccer skills, there, he found a stray dog.

• He was practicing his soccer skills; and then found a stray dog.

• He was practicing his soccer skills when he found a stray dog.

What change, if any, should be made?

Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

• Change bakeing to baking

• Change I to me

• Change cookies to cookie's

Which of the following is a complete sentence?

• Because night fell
• Jim ate the sandwich.
• On a tree-lined path.
• In our area of the city.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.1.1J

Choose the best conjunction to join the sentence pair.

[hint: a conjunction is like the glue in a sentence]

We can ask directions. We can use a map.

• and

• but

• or

• because

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision?

The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.