Revising 2

once upon a time, there was an ogre that live in a swamp.

• capitalize once

• capitalize ogre

• delete the comma

• change the period to an exclamation point

It is not hard to ask questions at home but it is hard to ask them in class.

• change the period to a question mark

• add a comma after but

• add a comma before but

• change questions to question's

My brother's birthday is next Saturday.

• capitalize brother

• make no change

• capitalize birthday

• add a comma after birthday

George Washington was the first president of the United states of America.

• capitalize of

• capitalize president

• capitalize states

• capitalize first president

The mail was sent to Houston Texas for Julie on her birthday.

• capitalize birthday

• make no change

• put a comma after Houston

• put a comma after Texas

If I go to the mall I will buy a new pair of jeans.

• change jeans to jean

• change pair to pairs

• capitalize mall

• add a comma after mall

I am going to eat lunch in the cafeteria with my grandma today.

• capitalize cafeteria

• add a comma after cafeteria

• capitalize grandma

• make no change

Dr. Seuss is an author who writes children's books.

• change writes to wrote

• change author to auther

• change children's to childrens

• make no change

Reading makes people better at choosing the write answers on tests to write down.

• change choosing to chosing

• change the first write to right

• change makes to make

• make no change

I am tired sick and angry about missing the birthday party for my friend, Shay.

• add a comma after tired

• remove the comma after friend

• make no change

• change missing to mising