English/Editing Mini Mark

How should sentence 3 be changed?

• A Change technically to technacally

• B Change started to starts

• C Insert a comma after mouse

• D Change film company to Film Company

Tags

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 5?

• F Tangled is about the princess Rapunzel; meanwhile it gives a new look into the traditional tale of a girl stuck in her tower.

• G Tangled is about the princess Rapunzel, it gives a new look into the traditional tale of a girl stuck in her tower.

• H Tangled is about the princess Rapunzel, and it gives a new look into the traditional tale of a girl stuck in her tower.

• J Tangled is about the princess Rapunzel, and it gives a new look, into the traditional tale of a girl stuck, in her tower.

Tags

CCSS.RI.5.7

CCSS.RI.6.7

CCSS.RL.5.7

CCSS.RL.6.7

CCSS.RL.7.7

What is the correct way to write sentence 7?

• A People have difficulty understanding how a movie could take so long to make, but the fact is that complicated CGI (computer-generated imagery) films take time. Since so many artists must work on them.

• B Since people have difficulty understanding how a movie could take so long to make, the fact is, that complicated CGI (computer-generated imagery) films take time while so many artist must work on them.

• C People have difficulty understanding how a movie could take so long to make, but the fact is that complicated CGI (computer-generated imagery) films take time since so many artist must work on them.

• D With people having difficulty understanding how a movie could take so long to make the fact is that complicated CGI (computer-generated imagery) films take time since so many artist must work on them.

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CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

What change should be made in sentence 10?

• F Change This to Which

• G Change animated to anamated

• H Delete the comma after movie

• J Change had to have

Tags

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

What change needs to be make in sentence 16?

• A Insert a comma after time

• B Change still to therefore

• C Change characteristics to chractoristics

• D Change appear to appeared

Tags

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18?

• F Change Disney animation studios to Disney Animation Studios

• G Change took to takes

• H Change lead to leed

• J No change should be made in sentence 18

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CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

What change needs to be made in sentence 19?

• A Change This to These

• B Change makes to make

• C Insert a comma after characters

• D Change realistic to realistec

Tags

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 29?

• F Tangled is a masterpiece and certainly deserves all the praise it gets while it's important to remember all of the time and effort that went into making it.

• G While Tangled is a masterpiece and certainly deserves all the praise it gets, it's important to remember all of the time and effort that went into making it.

• H While Tangled is a masterpiece, and certainly deserves all the praise it gets, it's important to remember all of the time, and effort that went into making it.

• J Tangled is a masterpiece. And certainly deserves all the praise it gets so it's important to remember all of the time and effort that went into making it.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B