The Third Wish - Grammar

Ur going to love this story.

• Your

• We

• You're

• Everyone

When i read the story, I thought it was boring.

• "when"

• no comma

• I

• change was to is

There are alot of messages from this story.

• a lot

• their

• they're

• stories.

If u read into the messages, u will see how it makes u think.

• your

• "if"

• no comma

• you

Mr. Peters pricked his tongue 2 keep frm making bad wishes.

• to, from

• prick

• tongue is misspelled

• makin'

Leita and Rhea are happy when there together.

• their

• is, not are

• to gether

• they're

When he was a swan the King of the Forest was entangled in thorns.

• comma after swan

• lowercase name of the king

• entangled is misspelled

• need an exclamation point not a period

Mr. peter was actually a kind man

• Mr. Peters

• take out actually

• Change kind to "nice"

• Mr. Peters; period after man

The characters in this story all have there own desires.

• desire without an s

• their

• they're

• take out "all"

Leita and Mr. Peters we're married.

• Mr. Peters and Leita

• were

• are married

• comma after Mr. Peters