
Narrative Writing: Revising and Editing
Authored by Leo Spengler
English
6th - 12th Grade
CCSS covered
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Revise this: The forest was very beautiful.
The forest was enchanting.
The forest made me very happy.
Redwoods stretched from the dense, green foliage into the blue sky.
The forest was big and majestic. There were trees everywhere.
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CCSS.L.2.1E
CCSS.L.1.1F
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Revise this: She thought the roller coaster was intense.
The wind swept her air and her eyes began to tear as she hurdled towards the loop.
The Incredicoaster is an intense roller coaster.
The roller coaster was scary!
The loop on the Incredicoaster scared her.
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CCSS.L.2.1E
CCSS.L.1.1F
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Revise this: He gave his orders to the men.
He shouted his orders at the men.
"Mortars! Incoming! Get down! Get to cover!"
The lieutenant gave his orders to the people around him.
The lieutenant told his men to get down and to get to cover.
Tags
CCSS.L.3.2C
CCSS.L.4.2B
CCSS.L.6.3A
CCSS.L.8.1C
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Revise this: He was so angry.
I had never seen him so angry.
He had an furious and dangerous look on his face as he raged around the room.
He shouted, cursed and hit the table.
His brow furrowed and his veins popped. He slammed his fist onto the table.
Tags
CCSS.L.2.1E
CCSS.L.3.1A
CCSS.L.3.1G
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Edit this: "I want pizza," she says.
"I want pizza," she claims.
"I want pizza," she shouts.
"I want pizza," she said.
"I want pizza," she explains.
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CCSS.L.3.2C
CCSS.L.4.2B
CCSS.L.6.3A
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Edit this: "The storm is approaching" he whispered.
"The storm is approaching." he whispers,
"The storm is approaching," he whispered.
"The storm is approaching," he whispers.
The storm is approaching, he whispers,
Tags
CCSS.L.3.2C
CCSS.L.4.2B
CCSS.L.6.3A
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Edit this: She turns the wheel hard.
She is turning the wheel hard.
She turned the wheel hard.
She will turn the wheel hard.
She turn the wheel hard.
Tags
CCSS.L.3.1E
CCSS.L.4.1B
CCSS.L.5.1.B-D
CCSS.L.5.1C
CCSS.L.5.1D
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