EDITING

What word should be changed?

It was a quite sunday afternoon, and my brother, Henry, and I were playing video games.

• Change were for where

• change sunday for Sunday

• No change is needed

All of a suddenly we heard a loud crash in the kitchen.

• Change all for old

• Change suddenly for sudden

• Change loud for load

• No change is needed

we both jumped in suprize and dropped our controllers.

• Change dropped for drop

• Change controllers for control

• Change suprize for surprise

• No change is needed

“Mom,” henry called,

• change Mom for mom

• Change henry for Henry

• Change called for call

• No change is needed

“It was probly just a dish that fell off the counter,”

• Change probly for probably

• Change just for yust

• Change off for of

• Change counter for caunter

“I’m going to beet you!”

• Change I'm for I am

• Change beet for beat

• Change you for yu

• NO change is needed

I picked up my controller and laffed.

• No change in needed

• Change picked for pick

• Change controller for controler

• Change laffed for laughed

Our class went on an excursion to the Sunnyvale zoo last week.

• Change class for clas

• Change zoo for Zoo

• Change Our for our

• No change is needed.

The tigers cage was so small. The big male tiger had no room to run around and he seemed so sad.

• Change tigers for tiger's

• Change big for bigg

• Change had for have

• No change is needed

Also, the elephants food. It looked so old and disgusting I bet the elephant didn't even want it.

• Change Also for olso

• Change elephants for elephant's

• Change didn't for did not

• No change is needed