Show Don't Tell Revision Practice

What's the strongest revision of the sentence below?

The sky is mostly blue.

• The sky is blue because that is usually how it is unless it's cloudy or rainy.

• A single cloud floats over the swings.

• The sky has mostly blue in it.

• The sky looks blue.

Drag the correct prepositions in the boxes below.

She laces ​​ (a)   her skates then glides ​ (b)   the ice.

• up
• across
• into
• around
• beneath
• through

REVISE this sentence with an ACTION VERB:

The bird had sharp claws.

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Revise this sentence to make it a SHOWING sentence:

It looks mean.

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Write a SHOWING sentence to describe a part of this image.

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