2nd Nine Weeks Revise/Edit REVIEW

1. Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 8?

• A. However

• B. In other words

• C. For example

• After that

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

2. The word bad is not the right word for sentence 11. Which word would better help explain the condition of the animals?

• F. injured

• G. endangered

• H. worse

• J. troubled

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.1.1F

3. Jason needs a topic sentence for the fourth paragraph (sentences 14-19). Which sentence could come just before sentence 14 and help open this paragraph?

• A. Education is good for adults and children.

• B. Helping animals is important because we share our planet.

• C. There are several towns in our state that have zoos.

• D. Zoos will also be good for people in our community.

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CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.3.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

4. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 14 and 15?

• F. A zoo can educate children, families, and teaching different animals on our planet.

• G. A zoo can educate children and families about different animals on our planet.

• H. A zoo can educate children and families. Teaching about different animals on our planet.

• J. A zoo can educate children and families since teaching different animals on our planet.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.4.2C

5. What is the best way to revise sentence 22?

• A. People will make money by doing the work of building the zoo.

• B. People who do the work and get a job will make money building the zoo.

• C. People who get a job and work to build the zoo make money.

• D. This sentence does not need to be revised.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

6. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• F. Change where to were

• G. Change his to its

• H. Change cares for to caring for

• J. No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

7. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?

• A. delete more

• B. change than to then

• C. change males to Males

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.3.1G

8. What change should be made in sentence 24?

• F. change no real to know real

• G. change the to an

• H. change has to having

• J. change predator's to predators

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CCSS.L.1.1H

9. What change needs to be made in sentence 27?

• A. change will be safe to will being safe

• B. change built to build

• C. change baby to babies

• D. insert a comma after trees

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

10. What is the correct way to write sentence 31?

• F. Our Founding Fathers chose the bald eagle as our national bird. In 1792 because it represents freedom and strength.

• G. Our Founding Fathers chose the bald eagle as our national bird in 1792 that is because it represents freedom and strength.

• H. Our Founding Fathers chose the bald eagle as our national bird in 1792 because it represents freedom and strength.

• J. Our Founding Fathers chose the bald eagle as our national bird in 1792. And it represents freedom and strength.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1J