Which of the following is correct?

"I want to eat Cheetos," Jane said.

"I want to eat cheetos," Jane Said.

"I want to eat Cheetos" Jane said.

"I want to eat Cheetos" Jane Said.

What is the best way to join these two sentences: The movie theater was packed full of people excited to see the new Star Wars movie. So I decided to go see Transformers instead.

The movie theater was packed full of people excited to see the new Star Wars movie, so I decided to go see Transformers instead.

Because the movie theater was packed full of people excited to see the new Star Wars movie, therefore I decided to go see Transformers instead.

The movie theater was packed full of people, excited to see the new Star Wars movie, I decided to go see Transformers instead.

So I decided to go see Transformers instead, because the movie theater was packed full of people excited to see the new Star Wars movie.

What is the most effective revision to make in: Searching the Internet, Dudley was found listed for sale.

Searching the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.

She searched the Internet, she found Dudley listed for sale.

Searching the Internet was where she found Dudley listed for sale.

What is the most effective way to revise: With regular exercise and the diet was strict, Dudley grew trim and sleek, and he was able to make the first cut.

With regular exercise and a strict diet, Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.

The exercise was regular and the diet was strict, Dudley grew trim and sleek, and he was able to make the first cut.

The regular exercise and strict diet that caused Dudley to grow trim and sleek was able to make the first cut.

With regular exercise the diet was strict, so Dudley grew trim and sleek; he was able to make the first cut.

How should this sentence be changed: There’s science behind the alarm clock that wakes you up, the weather report that influences what you wear, the toothpaste you use to brush your teeth, and even the clean water that comes from your fawcet.

This sentence should not be changed

What is the correct way to write: Len Fisher is a scientist he has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Len Fisher is a scientist who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Len Fisher, a scientist making a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Len Fisher is a scientist. Who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

Sentence 6 is written correctly.

What change needs to be made: A robotic camera could do her job!

Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence

Insert quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence

Change the exclamation point to a comma

What change should be made? Pleased with our work Lucy and I headed to the kitchen for a treat.

Change Lucy and I to me and Lucy

Which sentence could be added after sentence 2 to strengthen the introductions to this story?

At this rate, it will be August before you even get out the door.

I think the door needs painting.

I am half as old as my brother.

In the meantime, our car needs a car wash and some gas.

1. Which sentence is correct?

But in 2005, Stevens found a way to make her work even more meaningful when she was asked to help a group of disabled veterans train their dogs to be service dogs.

But in 2005, Stevens found a way to make her work even more meaningful, she was asked to help a group of disabled veterans train their dogs to be service dogs.

Which sentence is correct?

This can not only affect a student’s ability to concentrate in class and work but also decrease enthusiasm for other aspects of everyday life, including spending time with friends and family.

This can not only affect a student’s ability to concentrate in class and at work but decreased enthusiasm for other aspects of everyday life including spending time with friends and family.

Revise this: The forest was very beautiful.

Redwoods stretched from the dense, green foliage into the blue sky.

The forest was big and majestic. There were trees everywhere.

Revise this: She thought the roller coaster was intense.

The wind swept her air and her eyes began to tear as she hurdled towards the loop.

The Incredicoaster is an intense roller coaster.

The loop on the Incredicoaster scared her.

Revise this: He was so angry.

His brow furrowed and his veins popped. He slammed his fist onto the table.

He had an furious and dangerous look on his face as he raged around the room.

He shouted, cursed and hit the table.

Which of the following is most suspenseful?

She heard a growling noise behind the closed door.

Behind the door was a giant, green bug.

Behind the door was an evil horse with red eyes.

Behind the door was a thousand poisonous snails.

Which verb tense is used in narrative writing?

Past (She ran towards the fire.)

Present (She runs towards the fire.)

Future (She will run towards the fire.)

Which of the following quotations is not formatted correctly?

"We can always Google it" she said.

"No; maybe it's this one," she replied.

"We'll never get this right!" he exclaimed.

Which of the following is a correctly punctuated complex sentence?

After I got home from school, I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.

After, I got home from school, I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.

After I got home from school I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.

Revising and Editing Review

Quiz

•

English

•

7th - 10th Grade

•

Practice Problem

•

Medium

•

CCSS

L.5.1E, L.2.1E, L.3.1G

+49

Standards-aligned

Britany Sellers

Used 81+ times

FREE Resource

35 questions

Show all answers

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

Change the period to a question mark.

Change had to has

Change to to too

Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(1) Tara had too much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

How could you combine sentences 1 and 2?

Tara had too much cake. Last night she is sick to her stomach this morning.

Sick to her stomach this morning, Tara had too much cake.

Tara had too much cake last night, she is sick this morning.

Tara had too much cake last night, so she is sick to her stomach this morning.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

Change Jenny and Haley to Them

Change there to their

Change dogs to dog’s

Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

However,

Therefore,

In order to,

Finally,

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

Change monkey’s to monkeys

Change swung to swinged

Add a comma after swung

Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

14) The monkeys swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell to the ground.

How could you combine sentences 14 and 15?

The monkeys swung through the trees, one of them fell to the ground.

One of the monkeys falling to the ground swung through the trees.

As the monkeys swung through the trees, one of them fell to the ground.

The monkeys on the ground swung and fell.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

30 sec • 1 pt

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheering wildly.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

Add a comma after cheering

Change cheering to cheered

Change the period to a question mark

Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

Create a free account and access millions of resources

Create resources

Host any resource

Get auto-graded reports

Continue with Google

Continue with Email

Continue with Classlink

Continue with Clever

or continue with

Microsoft

Apple

Others

Already have an account?

Similar Resources on Wayground

0 questions

Editing Task Practice 1

Quiz

•

0 questions

Revising and Editing Practice 1

Quiz

•

0 questions

sentence editing

Quiz

•

0 questions

Editing Do Now

Quiz

•

0 questions

End of Year Grammar & Editing

Quiz

•

0 questions

Revise and Edit 2

Quiz

•

0 questions

Revision and Editing

Quiz

•

0 questions

Revise and Edit Day 1

Quiz

•

Popular Resources on Wayground

5 questions

This is not a...winter edition (Drawing game)

Quiz

•

1st - 5th Grade

25 questions

Multiplication Facts

Quiz

•

5th Grade

10 questions

Identify Iconic Christmas Movie Scenes

Interactive video

•

6th - 10th Grade

20 questions

Christmas Trivia

Quiz

•

6th - 8th Grade

18 questions

Kids Christmas Trivia

Quiz

•

KG - 5th Grade

11 questions

How well do you know your Christmas Characters?

Lesson

•

3rd Grade

14 questions

Christmas Trivia

Quiz

•

5th Grade

20 questions

How the Grinch Stole Christmas

Quiz

•

5th Grade

Discover more resources for English

20 questions

Christmas Trivia

Quiz

•

6th - 8th Grade

10 questions

Exploring Christmas Traditions Through Cartoons

Interactive video

•

6th - 10th Grade

21 questions

Christmas Figurative Language

Quiz

•

6th - 8th Grade

50 questions

Christmas Carol Staves 1 - 5

Quiz

•

7th Grade

50 questions

A Christmas Carol Scene 1-6 2023

Quiz

•

7th Grade

20 questions

Figurative Language Review

Quiz

•

8th Grade

20 questions

Independent and Dependent Clauses

Quiz

•

7th Grade

20 questions

Context Clues

Quiz

•

7th Grade

Revising and Editing Review

35 questions

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

(1) Tara had too much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

How could you combine sentences 1 and 2?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

14) The monkeys swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell to the ground.

How could you combine sentences 14 and 15?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheering wildly.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheered wildly.

What is the best transition to add in front of sentence 10?

22) While David folded laundry, his brother does the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

(22) While David folded laundry, his brother did the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.

What is the best transition to add to the beginning of sentence 23?

Create a free account and access millions of resources

Similar Resources on Wayground

Popular Resources on Wayground

Discover more resources for English

Revising and Editing Review

35 questions

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

(1) Tara had too much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.How could you combine sentences 1 and 2?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

14) The monkeys swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell to the ground.How could you combine sentences 14 and 15?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheering wildly.What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheered wildly.What is the best transition to add in front of sentence 10?

22) While David folded laundry, his brother does the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

(22) While David folded laundry, his brother did the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.What is the best transition to add to the beginning of sentence 23?

Create a free account and access millions of resources

Similar Resources on Wayground

Popular Resources on Wayground

Discover more resources for English

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

(1) Tara had too much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

How could you combine sentences 1 and 2?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

14) The monkeys swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell to the ground.

How could you combine sentences 14 and 15?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheering wildly.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheered wildly.

What is the best transition to add in front of sentence 10?

22) While David folded laundry, his brother does the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

(22) While David folded laundry, his brother did the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.

What is the best transition to add to the beginning of sentence 23?