REVISING AND EDITING

4) We could use printed instructions but we couldn't look them up on the internet. (5) We also look for new recipes or cook together.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 4?

• change but to or

• add a comma before but

• add a comma after but

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

1) My parents believed that we should spend more quality family time, and less time in the virtual world.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 1?

• remove the comma before and

• change parents to parent's

• change we to us

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the BEST way to combine these two sentences?

The rain would not stop pouring. We had to pull over on the side of the road.

• The rain would not stop pouring, but we had to pull over on the side of the road.

• The rain would not stop pouring, so we had to pull over on the side of the road.

• The rain would, not stop pouring, and we had to pull over, on the side of the road.

• no change needed

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

After we went on our field trip Ms. Harris gave us treats.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• change gave to gived

• Ms. Harris gave us treats, after we went on our fieldtrip.

• add a comma after trip

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A