Revising/Editing

Did you ever wonder why Frosty the Snowman is not as popular as Rudolph.

What change, if any, needs to be made?

• Change Frosty the Snowman to Frosty The Snowman

• Change the period to a question mark

• Make no change

What is the best way to combine these sentences?

He liked the story. He approved the book.

• He liked the story, he approved the book.

• He liked the story, because he approved the book.

• He liked the story, then he approved the book.

• He liked the story, and he approved the book.

Which is not a complete sentence?

• That's why Sam decided to sing about a snowman.

• The movie a huge success.

• It was written by an author from California, Gina Davis, known as the first female author.

• Mickey Tut directed the music for the movie.

This sentence is not clear to the reader. What words should be used instead of "it"?

As Gina worked on it, she read it to Chris.

• the bowling alley

• the story

• the pictures

• Frosty's scarf

What change, if any, is needed in the following sentence?

She thought that if he liked the story, other children would like it, to.

• Change "to" to "too"

• delete the comma after story

• change children to children's

• no change is needed

What change is needed in the following sentence?

By December, 10 2020, the teachers and students were ready for Christmas Break to begin.

• Change by to buy

• Change December to december

• Change December, 10 2020 to December 10, 2020

• no change is needed

What is the bests way to combine the sentences?

Matilda is one of Amy's daughters. Sara is one of Amy daughters, too.

• Matilda is one of Amy's daughters, Sara is a daughter, too.

• Matilda is one of Amy's daughters and Sara is one of Amy's daughters.

• Matilda and Sara are Amy's daughters.

What is the best way to combine these sentences?

Poppy works in the beach store all year. Ashley only works in the beach store in the summer.

• Poppy works in the beach shop all year, because Ashley only works in the beach shop in the summer.

• Poppy works in the beach shop all year, but Ashley only works there in the summer.

• Poppy works in the beach shop all year, but Ashley only works in the beach shop in the summer.

Crazy Craig is an expert with boats. ____________ , he knows how to make all of the engines run.

• Next

• Then

• For example

• However

"May I have some sweet tea? asked Nicholas as he helped Janice.

• insert quotation marks after the period

• insert quotation marks after the question mark

• change the question mark to a comma

• delete the quotation mark