DO NOW REVISING/EDITING

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 4 and 5?

(4) You can't go outside and play. (5) Until you finish your homework.

• You can't go outside and play, until you finish your homework.

• Until you finish your homework, you can't go outside and play.

• Until you finish your homework you can't go outside and play.

• Until you finish your homework. You can't go outside and play.

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

Today is our big game yet I left my shoulder pads at home.

• change yet to for

• add a comma after game

• change left to leaved

• make no change

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

My birthday on the beach was the most awesomest time I've had in my life.

• change was to were

• change most aesomest to awesomest

• change most awesomest to most awesome

• make no change

(1) Mariana dreamed of going on vacation. (2) However, I had doubts about which place would be as much fun than the others. (3) Mariana wanted to see a place that was bigger than Houston and worse hot than Galveston.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 3?

• Change bigger to biggest

• change worse to less

• change Galveston to galveston

• make no change