intervention writing

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• She is an astronaut, medical doctor, and a surgeon.

• She is an astronaut, and a medical doctor, and a surgeon.

• Not only is she an astronaut, but she is also a medical doctor and a surgeon.

• No revision needed.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change one to won.

• Change two to too.

• Change medals to meddles.

• Sentence 3 should not be changed.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

• Change Jesse’s to Jesse

• Change was to were

• Change broken to breaking

• Change the period to a question mark.

What is the correct way to write sentences 5?

• Harriet helped over 300 slaves escape to freedom, to the Northern United States and Canada.

• Harriet helped over 300 slaves, escape to freedom to the Northern United States and Canada.

• Harriet helped over 300 slaves and escape to freedom to the Northern United States and Canada.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• He also invented a gas mask, using it to rescue miners. Who were trapped in an underground mine.

• He also invented a gas mask, using it to rescue miners, who were trapped in an underground mine.

• He also invented a gas mask that was used to rescue miners who were trapped in an underground mine.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 4?

• Yet

• Afterwards

• In addition

• For example