Editing/Revising Review

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

(22) For example, if you touch a hot stove with your finger there are neurons ready to relay a message of pain to your brain.

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change touch to touched

• Insert a comma after finger

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 24?

(24) With all its intricacies, the human brain is a sensative and delicate organ.

• Change intricacies to intracacies

• Change sensative to sensitive

• Change delicate to delacate

• Sentence 24 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

How should sentence 7 be changed?

(7) When Emma was born, mom and dad gave her the tiny room next to theirs.

• Delete the comma

• Change mom and dad to Mom and Dad

• Change theirs to there’s

• Sentence 7 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 14?

(14) They are both in elementery school, which begins earlier in the morning than middle school does.

• Change elementery to elementary

• Change which to it

• Change than to then

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18?

(18) If they were in the same room, all there things could be in one place.

• Change they to we

• Delete the comma

• Change there to their

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What change needs to be made in sentence 19?

(19) Also, sharing a room with Megan means that my room looks like a little girls room.

• Change means to meaning

• Change that to this

• Change looks to look

• Change girls to girl’s

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

How should sentence 21 be changed?

(21) If I had my own room, I would paint it a color appropriate for a teenager and hang some posters without no Disney princesses and unicorns on them.

• Change appropriate to apropriate

• Insert a comma after teenager

• Delete no

• No change should be made in sentence 21.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 25?

(25) Finally, I’m in middle school, which means that I have more homework then Megan does.

• Change which to this

• Change I to we

• Change then to than

• No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.4.1A

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 29?

(29) And on weekends, I like to have friends over, I would love to be able to talk about teenage things without little ears listening to all my conversations.

• Change weekends to weekend’s

• Change the comma after over to a semicolon

• Change conversations to convarsations

• Sentence 29 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 30?

(30) The current living arrangements is causing me a lot of stress.

• Change arrangements to arangements

• Change is causing to are causing

• Change a lot to alot

• Make no change