Laughter Thesis Statements

Why is this not an effective thesis statement for explaining the importance of laughter?

Laughter is beneficial because it could bring you joy when you're sad.

• It uses some basic words.

• It is effective.

Is this a strong thesis for our essay?

Laughter is beneficial because it helps us get through tough situations.

• Yes

• No

Is this a strong thesis for our essay?

Laughter is beneficial because it can improve your mood.

• Yes

• No

Is this a strong thesis for our essay?

Laughter is beneficial because it energizes you.

• Yes

• No

Is this a strong thesis statement?

Laughter is important because it brings joy to others.

• Yes

• No

Can you use the word happy in your thesis statement?

• NO! That word is dead to us.

• Yes. It's the best word.

What is a stronger way to say "get better" or "make better"?

• reduce

• add

• improve