Revising and Editing #2

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Change get to got

• Change too much to to much

• Change atention to attention

• Sentence 5 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 11?

• Change quite to quiet

• Delete the comma after inside

• Change and using to she uses

• Sentence 11 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write sentence 14?

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl, and she eats. Whenever she’s hungry.

• However, when we put food in my cat’s bowl. She eats whenever she’s hungry.

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl. And eats whenever she’s hungry.

• However, we put food in my cat’s bowl, and she eats whenever she’s hungry

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

0 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 17?

• Change never to ever

• Change and shred to they don’t shred

• Change contents to contints

• No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

1 What is the correct way to write sentences 29 and 30?

• Over and over, cats have come to the aid of their owners and proved that they are heroic, loyal companions.

• Over and over, cats have come to the aid of their owners and proved. That they are heroic, loyal companions.

• Over and over, cats have come to the aid of their owners, they have proved that they are heroic, loyal companions.

• Sentences 29 and 30 are written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

How should sentence 31 be changed?

• Change hear to heard

• Change reasons to reason’s

• Change remember to rember

• Change it’s to its

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CCSS.L.2.2C

What is the correct way to write sentences 6 and 7?

• In the maze of charred trees, there was a tiny seedling. Which began to grow.

• In the maze of charred trees, there was a tiny seedling, it began to grow.

• In the maze of charred trees, a tiny seedling beginning to grow.

• In the maze of charred trees, a tiny seedling began to grow

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CCSS.L.4.1F

How should sentence 12 be changed?

• Insert a comma after trunk

• Change bare to bear

• Change filled to fill

• Sentence 12 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.2B

5 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 13?

• Change Summer to summer

• Change had become to becoming

• Insert a comma after tree

• No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 21?

• Change berrys to berries

• Delete and

• Change wildflowers to wildflower’s

• No change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D