Editing

Rewrite this sentence without the redundant phrase:

The group collaborated together to build a computer.

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Rewrite without unnecessary words or phrases.

It happened to be after midnight when a group of seven students broke into Disneyland.

Replace phrases with a single word to make the sentence more concise.

The student who attends high school has great skills in the area of music.

Reduces clauses to a single word to make the sentence more concise.

When she entered the room, Katie sang out loudly.

Rewrite the sentence so that a verb is used to show the action instead of a noun.

The artist made a painting of a tree.

Use specifics instead of generalizations. Rewrite this sentence to have more specific information.

A few students were accepted to some colleges in California.

Use accurate words.

Jenny was filled with allot of joy.

(a)  

Remove the editorial content so that the sentence is all factual.

The amazing yearbook class created the awesome 2021 yearbook that was given out in the beautiful month of June.

Rewrite the sentence so that it uses dynamic, specific verbs.

He got an A on his test because he did his study guide.

Change this passive sentence into an active voice sentence.

Creating their infographics will be done by the yearbook students in class today.

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