Revising and Editing 2.2

How does sentence 4 need to be changed?

• Change have become to has become

• Change then to than

• Change to me to too me

• Sentence 4 does not need to be changed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

What change needs to be made in sentence 10?

• Change were to was

• Change climmed to climbed

• Change fell to falled

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

What is the correct way to write sentence 13?

• For the fourth-grade class hike, there were a lot of kids they wore new hiking shoes that were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike. A lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, and they were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes. That were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 21?

• Change I thought to Thought

• Change skipping to skiping

• Change Event to event

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

How does sentence 23 need to be changed?

• Change it to they

• Change me to us

• Change the period to a comma

• Sentence 23 does not need to be changedma

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

What change should be made in sentence 29?

• Change Ive to I’ve

• Change already to alreddy

• Change where to were

• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.2.2C

Claire wants to strengthen the focus of her story. Which of the following is the BEST replacement for sentence 10?

• Being at camp had been a wonderful experience for Jared and the other kids.

• Jared was sometimes a little afraid to do things he had never done before.

• Today was Jared’s last chance to overcome his fear and give rappelling a try.

• Even though the others had been rappelling down the side of the cliff, Jared didn’t want to.

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CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.10

The meaning of sentence 12 is unclear. What change can Claire make to improve the clarity of this sentence?

• Change He to Another counselor

• Change cliff to spot

• Change him to them

• Change the rope to it

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

3 Which of these sentences can BEST follow and support sentence 15?

• She would help keep the rope tight and make sure Jared was safe coming down.

• Andrea had been such a good friend, and looking down at her right now made Jared think of all the fun they had had.

• Jared was feeling great and stepped back from the cliff to look around at all the beautiful scenery.

• Andrea was right there, connected to the rope that Jared was connected to at the bottom of the cliff

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CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.6

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 24 and 25?

• Since he made his way steadily down with a grin, it began to spread over his face.

• He made his way steadily down because a grin began to spread over his face.

• As he made his way steadily down, a grin began to spread over his face.

• He made his way steadily down a grin began to spread over his face.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E