Checking Comprehension - Writing Rubric 6TH

What needs to be improved? <br /><br />"While I eating was, the phone rang and I was in the kitchen."

• Use of English 2: Grammar structure
• Use of English 1: Vocabulary from the unit
• Organization 1: Logical sequence

What needs to be improved? <br /><br />"When my father drank hot chocolate, I singing."

• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling
• Use of English 2: Grammar structure
• Content: all requirements

What needs to be improved? <br /><br />"Jenny. I got sunburn. I was sleeping. I forgot to put on sunscreen. Bye."

• Organization 2: structure of text - connectors and phrases
• Communicative achievement: communicative purpose - text is understood
• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling

What needs to be improved? <br /><br />"Wen my friends was doing homework I arrive home. her mother prepared cokis and keik."

• Content: all requirements
• Organization 1: logical sequence
• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling