6th_Writing Rubric

What needs to be improved? ----------"While I eating was, the phone rang and I was in the kitchen."

• Use of English 2: Grammar structure

• Use of English 1: Vocabulary from the unit

• Organization 1: Logical sequence

What needs to be improved?___________"When my father drank hot chocolate, I singing."

• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling

• Use of English 2: Grammar structure

• Content: all requirements

What needs to be improved? _________"Jenny. I got sunburn. I was sleeping. I forgot to put on sunscreen. Bye."

• Organization 2: structure of text - connectors and phrases

• Communicative achievement: communicative purpose - text is understood

• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling

What needs to be improved? ___________"Wen my friends was doing homework I arrive home. her mother prepared cokis and keik."

• Content: all requirements

• Organization 1: logical sequence

• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling