Revise and Edit Review 3/26/2021

What is the best way to revise sentence 4?

• I raised my hand to share quickly.

• I was chosen first and raised my hand.

• I quickly raised my hand and was chosen to share first.

• No changes are needed.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is not complete?

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 7

• Sentence 11

• Sentence 12

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What transition word could best be added before the words The player in sentence 10 to improve the story.

• First

• Finally

• Suddenly

• Next

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

What is the best way, if any, to revise the ideas in sentence 11?

• Finally Player One finishes the turn and produces the score.

• Finally Player one finishes the turn by adding the products for the score.

• Finishes the turn by adding the products for the score.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Change was to were

• Change was to will be

• Change forget to forgot

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change signe to sign

• Change Suddenly to Sudenly

• Change neon to neeon

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.2.2C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change darted to had dart

• Change was buying to bought

• Change was buying to had bought

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 11?

• Change can see to seen

• Change can see to saw

• Change admire to admired

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D