Combine and Revise sentences

What is the best way to revise the sentence.

My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals and warned me.

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.

• My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.

• My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Which is the best way to combine the sentences.

He turned his golden eyes towards me. He almost looked embarrassed.

• He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed.

• When he turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.

• He turned his golden eyes towards me, he almost looked embarrassed.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Which is the best way to revise the sentence.

The excited children wait excitedly for Soriano to come.

• The children wait excitedly for Soriano to come.

• The children are excited, they wait excitedly for Soriano to come.

• The children wait excitedly. For Soriano to come.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Which is the best way to revise the sentence.

The Frio River Treetop is closer to home it is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer. To home, it is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home. It is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home as as result it is located, near, Leakey, Texas.

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

What is the correct way to write the sentence?

They live in family groups called troops can have as many as 20 members.

• They live in family groups called troops. And can have as many as 20 members.

• The family groups they live in are called troops and can have. As many as 20 members.

• They live in family groups called troops that can have as many as 20 members.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B