March 26 EDITING review

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change Leaves to Leafes

• Change brush to brushes

• Insert a comma after windows

• Change through to threw

What change should be made to sentence 8 ?

• change rain forests to rain forest's

• Change thickly to thick

• Insert a comma after shore

• Delete the comma after areas

What changes, if any , should be made to sentence 26?

• Change makes to make

• Change greatest to great

• Insert a comma after spot

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

What change , if any , should be made in sentence 29?

• Change provide to providing

• Change a to an

• Change enjoy to injoy

• No change is needed in this sentence

What change , if any , needs to be made in sentence 4?

• Change find to found

• Change entertain to entertaining

• change themselfs to themselves

• No change should be made in sentence 4

What change if any should be made in sentence 6 ?

• change are to were

• delete the comma after mammals

• change that to they

• no change should be made in sentence 6

What is the correct way to write sentence 10 ?

• One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. THen it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble i shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle . It is called a bubble ring , and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.