Editing

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 2?

• Change being to I am

• Insert a comma after childhood

• Change plays to playing

• Sentence 2 should not be changed.

What is the correct way to write sentence 5?

• I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness that teases my nostrils.

• As I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils.

• Pulling gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils.

• When I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, and the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils.

How should sentence 8 be changed?

• Insert a comma after grass

• Change reminds to reminding

• Change playing to to play

• Change Soccer to soccer

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 18?

• Insert a comma after way

• Change is processed to has processed

• Change centers’ to centers

• Sentence 18 should not be changed.

What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 20?

• Delete the comma

• Insert a comma after today

• Change innocent to inocent

• Make no change to sentence 20.