Editing and Revising

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

• change family to Family
• change I to me
• change river to River
• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Mom surprised us all when she declared, "let's all go get pizza!"

• Delete the quotation marks
• Change let's to Let's
• Remove the comma after declared
• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

• Change knew to new
• Change thrown to threw
• Change theirselves to themselves
• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

What is the best way to change sentence 11.

There coats ranged in color from orange-red to brownish-yellow.

• change There to Their

• change to to two

• change color to Color

• change coats to koats

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CCSS.L.3.1A

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

As the town mice hunt for wild flowers, birds, and berries, the hungry owl that want to eat them as a snack is hunting them.

• Change them to they

• change want to wants

• change town to Town

• take out the comma after berries

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to edit this sentence?

Mr. and mrs. Town Mouse seem disappointed when they see the plain home of the country mice.

• change country to Country

• change Town Mouse to town mouse

• Change plain to plane

• change mrs. to Mrs.

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?

They would talk the knight before and decide what they should wear the next day.

• change decide to decided

• change knight to night

• add a comma after before

• make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

Katie did not have a scar on her rite cheek.

• change did not to wouldn't

• change a to an

• change rite to right

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

What edit needs to be made to this sentence?

"How long until we get there? Timothy asked his dad for the tenth time.

• Add quotation marks after the question mark

• change asked to asks

• change for to four

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

"We're here!" shouted Timothy, as they pulled into the driveway.

• change shouted to shouts

• change We're to Were

• change driveway to Driveway

• Make no changes

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A