EGP FYE Revision 1

Considering the advantages and at least one disadvantage, explain which one of the three sports stars would be the most suitable for the club to open the tournament. You should concentrate on your chosen sports star and not refer to the other sports stars.

Answer in continuous prose, using your own words as far as possible.

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Answer explanation

Please refer to the marks scheme

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CCSS.W.11-12.1

CCSS.W.11-12.1A

CCSS.W.11-12.1B

CCSS.W.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.4

What would you grade your answer in Q1

• 9-10

  • Capacity to interpret evidence and sustained ability to present relevant arguments, analysis and exemplification maintaining a strong focus on the main issues in the question. • Comprehensive approach demonstrating ability to identify and select relevant information, data, concepts and opinions and maintain a strong focus on the key issues. • Shows the ability to communicate clearly and accurately in a fluent and organised manner.

• 6-8

  • Moderate range of arguments, analysis and exemplification covering some of the main issues in the question. • Demonstrating some grasp of the nature of key issues but with a restricted range or a loss of focus leading to the inclusion of some irrelevant material. • Shows the ability to communicate clearly and accurately in a fluent and organised manner.

• 3-5

  • Limited analysis shown in a response consisting of mainly undeveloped material. • A modest range of selected points, perhaps some of which are irrelevant or incorrect. • Ability to convey meaning but with limited powers of expression with some errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar which impede the flow and hinder communication.

• 1-2

  • Some simple, mainly unexplained or undeveloped points or perhaps a very narrow range – with little interpretation or analysis and little development or exemplification. • Limited range, dubious choice showing restricted appreciation of key issues. • Ability to convey meaning but with limited powers of expression with some errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar which impede the flow and hinder communication.

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CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.W.11-12.1

CCSS.W.11-12.1B

CCSS.W.11-12.4

CCSS.W.11-12.5

Considering three disadvantages and one advantage, explain which one of the three sports stars would be the least suitable for the club to open the tournament. You should concentrate on your chosen sports star and not refer to the other sports stars. Answer using your own words as far as possible

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CCSS.W.11-12.1

CCSS.W.11-12.1A

CCSS.W.11-12.1B

CCSS.W.11-12.2B

What would you grade your answer in Q3

As Question 1(a), but 4 × 2

each point 2 marks

I mark for answer + 1 mark for explanation

• 7-8

• 5-6

• 3-4

• 1-2

State the three pieces of additional information provided which you found the least relevant in deciding which sports star to choose

• Point 7

• Point 11

• Point 15

• Point 4

• Point 13

Answer explanation

Points 7, 11 and 15

Tags

CCSS.RI.11-12.7

Explain what the conversation between Antonia and Saul reveals about the relationship between: Antonia and the president. Answer in about 20 words.

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Answer explanation

Credit any two of the following or any other valid point.

She clearly does not understand his motivations (1) as she seems to want to turn everything he has done at the club on its head (1) and appears to think that she can simply bulldoze her initiatives through (1). She does not seem to care about maintaining traditions (1) and appears wilfully unaware of the president’s attitude to them (1). She does not seem to think it is necessary to confer with the president (1), taking it for granted that he will agree with her on everything (1).

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CCSS.RL.11-12.1

CCSS.RL.11-12.3

CCSS.W.11-12.9

What would you grade your answer in Q6

• 2

• 1

• 0

Explain what the conversation between Antonia and Saul reveals about the relationship between:

Antonia and Saul. Answer in about 20 words. Do not repeat any material used in 1(d)(i).

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CCSS.RL.11-12.1

CCSS.RL.11-12.3

CCSS.RL.11-12.6

CCSS.W.11-12.9

What would you grade your answer in Q8

• 2

• 1

• 0

In your opinion, explain why Suzy Hansen picked ‘All Sewn Up’ as the title for her article.

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Answer explanation

Credit any two of the following or any other valid point made. Sewing links with the type of business under discussion (1)/it reflects the dominant position of Inditex (1) as it is a leader in its field (1)/if something is all sewn up, the opposition is blocked or not allowed access (1).

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CCSS.RI.11-12.1

CCSS.RI.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.1

CCSS.W.11-12.9