Editing and Revising #2

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change the period to a question mark.

• Change had to has

• Change to to too

• Make no change

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change Jenny and Haley to Them

• Change there to their

• Change dogs to dog’s

• Make no change

(14) The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• Change monkey’s to monkeys

• Change swung to swinged

• Add a comma after swung

• Make no change

22) While David folded laundry, his brother does the dishes. (23) They went outside to play.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

• Change David to david

• Delete the comma after laundry

• Change does to did

• Make no change

Some fish _(move/moves)_ together for protection, hiding behind each other.

• move
• moves

Correct this sentence: Martha likes to swim, skiing, and to dance.

• Martha likes to swim, to ski, and to dance.

• Martha likes to swimming, to skiing, and to dancing.

• Martha likes to swim, skiing, and to sing.

Which is the run-on?

• I went to the store and got milk and then got bread.

• My cat knocks things off of the counter it makes me wake up at night.

• The bird sang a pretty song as the sun was rising in the morning.

• When it is raining, we can't play outside for recess.

Fix this sentence:
My father is tall my mother is short.

• My father is tall and my mother is short.
• My father is tall, and my mother is short.
• My father is tall, or my mother is short.
• My father is tall, my mother is short.

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I
• change lots to lot's
• change there to their
• no change is needed

Natalies' flower was the most beautiful I had ever seen.

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful
• ^{Change Natalies' to Natalies's}
• Change flower to flour
• No change is needed