Writing for Excellence - Financial Decision Making

"Going by bus to Rotorua is a lot cheaper than flying to Wellington, because it costs only [$ amount] for all of us compared with [$ amount] if we flew. This leaves us with [$ amount] for side trips, this would make the trip a better experience"

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"Rotorua is preferred because it is cheap"

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"Visiting the buried village will be more interesting than the wildlife park as we are keen to see what a real Māori village was like in the past, as many of us are studying Maori at school"

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"It is less expensive to go to Rotorua for our marae visit than it is to go to Wellington"

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"We can visit the buried village near Rotorua which will be more interesting to our class than going to the native bird sanctuary in Wellington"

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Going to Rotorua will cost us [$ amount], while going to Wellington costs [$ amount]. Which is much more and leaves us with [$ amount] for side trips"

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"Visiting the buried village will be more interesting for our class than the native bird sanctuary, because our class wants to see what a real Māori village was like in the past"

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"We should visit the buried village because its cool"

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