Revising (ARMS)

What is revising?

• changing the writing to make improvements

• fixing your writing to correct erros

Tags

CCSS.W.4.4

CCSS.W.4.5

How can you revise?

• use the ARMS method

• use the CUPS method

Tags

CCSS.W.4.4

CCSS.W.4.5

You add a new sentence when you

• edit

• revise

Tags

CCSS.W.4.5

(1)I love playing sports. (2) I've played football since I was five years old. (3) Last year I played wide receiver. (4) The ball is made of leather. (5) This year, I was named starting quarterback.

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 2

• Sentence 3

• Sentence 4

• Sentence 5

Food trucks have been living in the United States for over 100 years.

Kodi wants to use a more accurate word than living. Which of the following could BEST replace this word?

• coming

• operating

• offering

• showing

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CCSS.L.4.3A

CCSS.L.4.4A

CCSS.L.4.5C

CCSS.L.4.6

THE A in ARMS stands for ____.

• Answer

• Add

• Also

• Arms

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CCSS.RI.4.1

CCSS.RI.4.4

The R in ARMS stands for ____.

• Remind

• Redo

• Remove

• Restate

Tags

CCSS.L.4.4A

CCSS.RI.4.1

CCSS.RI.4.4

The S in ARMS stands for ____.

• Square

• Star

• Skip

• Substitute

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CCSS.RI.4.1

CCSS.RI.4.4

What is the best way to rewrite this sentence?

And brought her inside and made her a house dog.

• We brought her inside and made her a house dog.

• Made her a house dog and brought her inside.

• Brought her inside, and we made her a house dog.

• And brought her inside, and made her a house dog.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.4.3A

CCSS.W.4.4

Melanie forgot her lunch. She called her mother.

Combine the sentences.

• Melanie forgot her lunch because she called her mother.

• Melanie forgot. Her lunch and called her mother.

• Melanie forgot her lunch, so she called her mother.

• Melanie forgot her lunch so she called. Her mother.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.W.4.3C

CCSS.W.4.4