Revising Review

Which word can be added at the beginning of sentence 2? Use FANBOYS

(1)Subway Cat and I never got very close to each other after that. _______(2) Over time we formed a sort of friendship.

• yet

• in the same way

• for example

• therefore

I hoped that Subway Cat would come to enjoy his new life, but I missed seeing him on the train. Then, just when I had stopped looking for him, there he was! Subway Cat was alone, lying on his usual seat and licking his paws. At Eighth Street he got up and headed for the door. Then he looked back, flicked his tail, and stared straight at me.

What sentence would be a good wrap up (good ending)?

• Subway cat seemed happy to be on his own once again

• And this is now the end of the story about the brave little subway cat I met one day.

(9)Every Wednesday, my mother and I rode that same subway train. (10)We always got off at Eighth Street and walked to my piano teacher's house. (11)On that winter's day and every Wednesday for several months, the cat rode the same train we did. (12)He seemed to be by himself, with no one looking after him.

Where would you put this sentence:

{{{It's cold outside, but the subway is warm.}}}

• after sentence 10

• the sentence shouldn't be added

Which sentence is the best one?

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.

• My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me.

• My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

Which is the best sentence?

• He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed.

• When he turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.

• Turning his golden eyes toward me, which almost looked embarrassed.

• He turned his golden eyes toward me, he almost looked embarrassed.