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Although most people believe otherwise, bats are harmless and highly beneficial.

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In this essay I will discuss the crime rate in Mountain City.

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Energetic exercise is a good way to help relieve stress.

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Mountain City and Boone differ in many ways.

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This paper will consider the advantages and disadvantages of students having nightly homework.

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Many people do not like to watch violent horror movies. 

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Today’s movies do not have the emotional impact of the classic horror movies of the 1940’s.

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Rap music is the best music ever.

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Although many people find rap music offensive, it has had a positive impact on today’s youth.

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The life of a typical sixth grade student is challenging due to the need to succeed in extracurricular activities.

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